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B. E. Lunetois's avatar

Thibault is my favorite. Like gods of old he was made by the person who needs him with her heart instead of her mind.

Aha, how embarrassing! I said I would read it over my coffee tomorrow but I sat in bed and read it tonight anyway. But I am glad I did. Aside from the interesting nature of the story and the clear passion you have for the concept it's also kind of good inspiration. Thinking about thinking; metacognition, whatever you want to call it is really great when writing one writes from a lot of perspectives and this piece gives me ideas for writing alien minds and psychic entities alike

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Well this was something. Very interesting. Someone commented that this doesn’t appeal to general public due to the tech language; not sure if I agree. In fact, I would’ve argued almost the opposite that to describe an emerging consciousness(ish), you’re throwing too many explanatory lines here. Could be saved for later and let the reader just see the bits and slowly understand that, wait… they’re awakening?

Regardless, fantastic work. Gotta check the next chapters!

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